I'm glad I learned to express my thoughts clearly and everyone loves to read them. Sometimes it takes a lot of thinking power to think about the surroundings. Someone who likes it, someone who enjoys it, appreciates that he is writing very well. Reading and commenting on the post I wrote would give me a lot of bullshit and I would get new ideas to write new ones. I'm really glad I got your response.

मां ही मेरी जन्नत हैं ।।

बचपन ही सही है
जैसे घर में है मेरी मां ।।

सपने सारे खुशियों से
मेरे पापा ने सजाए ।।

रोना भी तो बहोत था
हमेशा मेरे पास मेरी मां रहे ।।

दिन है यह शरारतो का
मौज मस्ती भरा हुआ था ।।

खाने की थाली लेकर मैंने
बहुत बार मेरे पीछे दौड़ाया भी तो है ।।

मां तो मां ही है जन्नत भी कम है
पिता की मुझमें बसी हुई जान है ।।

नन्नासा तो मेरा जहान है
मेरे मां पापा से हसी भरा मेरा एक जहा हैं ।।

6 responses to “मां ही मेरी जन्नत हैं ।।”

  1. aparna12 Avatar
    aparna12

    Wow. Such a lovely poem. Sahi kaha Mata-pita hi to Bhagwaan ke pratinidhi hote hai. ♥️♥️♥️😊😊😊. Keep writing.

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  2. Gaurav Anil Chaudhary Avatar
    Gaurav Anil Chaudhary

    Haa hai suchh hai kyuki o hame apne se jyada khayal rakhate hai aur sab kuchh Jo unhe nhi mila hai o hame Dena chahate hai…

    Sab kuchh best se best ho… 🤗🤗🤗😊🤩

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  3. vermavkv Avatar
    vermavkv

    बहुत सुंदर |

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  4. ShankySalty Avatar
    ShankySalty

    Amazing ❤❤❤

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  5. Gaurav Anil Chaudhary Avatar
    Gaurav Anil Chaudhary

    Thank You so much for your lovely comments 💯💖🌹

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  6. Gaurav Anil Chaudhary Avatar
    Gaurav Anil Chaudhary

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read.💖🌹🌹

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